Excerpt Monday
I’ve been remiss with the blogging (seriously, I need to get some roommates. I don’t think I have the time, or the energy, or whatever, to keep this place running by myself.) Anyway, Romance Divas have begun to post and link to members’ excerpts on Monday, and I’ve never done it before.
This is from Rocky Mountain Howl, my one and only WIP, which I’m trying to finish within, let’s see – oh, just the next ten days. I want to submit three sentences to the Knight Agency’s Book in a Nutshell contest (click on the link, then search for “book in a nutshell” – I can’t seem to link to the specific post), but it’s only for completed manuscripts. The Tomboy Diva is on Easter break this week, and will be doing a round of house parties and relative visiting that would exhaust a Regency heroine, so I just might be able to pull it off.
At the end of of this post are links to other Divas’ excerpts.
***Begin Exceprt***
Cade MacDougall struck a match against the front porch railing and lit a cigarillo. He took a long, satisfying drag as he leaned against a column and surveyed his domain in the blinding sunshine of a postcard Colorado summer’s day.
In the distance to his right, horses ran free in the pastures while grooms cleaned the stables. To his left, the wood shop vibrated to the sound of saws and hammers and drills. From inside the house behind him wafted the aroma of baked chicken and fresh bread. And ten yards in front of him, beside a swing set in the grassy center of his compound, a young wolf tormented the person Cade loved most in the world.
Aaron couched while Rebecca grabbed a fistful of fur and swung a stubby little leg over his back. She pulled herself up to sit astride, legs dangling three feet off the ground. Aaron began turning in circles, around and around as a dog chases his tail until Becca, dizzy and laughing, fell into the soft grass. When she tried to stand up, Aaron poked her in the butt with his nose, or nudged her in the stomach with his head, or lightly tapped her on the back with his tail. She plopped back down to the grass. Becca stood up. Aaron knocked her down. Soon, overcome with shrieking giggles, she lay for a while in the grass while Aaron yawned and scratched and waited for her to catch her breath. Then they did it all over again for the sixth or tenth time while Cade looked on with quiet delight. He preferred Becca’s giggle to any other sound on earth, and he liked any wolf who made her giggle like that.
Mrs. Palmer would have no trouble getting the child down for her nap after lunch. He would have a great deal of trouble if Mrs. Palmer saw Becca and Aaron. The latest nanny didn’t approve of little girls roughhousing with werewolves.
“Baby girl,” he called. “Go inside and let Euri wash you up for lunch.”
“Da-deeee….”
“Inside, Rebecca. Now.”
She pouted, but she seized a chunk of the good-natured Aaron’s flank to pull herself up. Still a little dizzy, she careened up the porch steps. He reached down to stroke her cheek and run his hand through her long hair, as black and curly as his own. She gave him a big knee hug and smiled up at him.
“I’m gonna try to be a cat again.”
“Why don’t you try to be something else? I can’t tell my wolf friends my baby girl’s a cat.”
“That’s what I am, Daddy!”
He laughed ruefully. “If you say so, baby.” It tickled him that she pretended to be the sole shape-shifting female on the planet. But a cat?
Becca went inside, Aaron right behind her.
Cade put out a boot to stop him. “Only two-footed in the house, pup. It’s a nanny thing.”
While the wolf might not understand the words, he recognized a command from his Alpha and obeyed immediately. Aaron bounded off the porch.
Cade knew Mrs. Palmer had wolf issues, but she didn’t drink, she didn’t steal, and she didn’t have a thing for fur. He didn’t want to hire another nanny. Premiere Professional Child Care didn’t want him to. They had yet to keep a placement fee from him.
Euri joined him on the porch. “The meal is ready. You should eat before it gets cold.”
Cade nodded but lingered to finish his cigar. “Becca wants to be a cat.”
“Perhaps you should get her a kitten.”
He did a double take. He’d never heard Euri say anything remotely in jest, and the brownie looked quite serious now.
“A kitten. On a ranch full of wolves.”
Euri nodded. “The girl needs a pet.”
“A cat’s not a pet. A cat’s an appetizer.”
****End Excerpt***
Other Diva Excerpts – Go. Read. Discover:
Stephanie Adkins – Resisting Kane (excerpt is PG-13, site is NC-17)
Gina Ardito – A Run For the Money
Eden Bradley – A 21st Century Courtesan (excert is R, site is NC-17)
Ella Drake – Scenting Cinnamon (excerpt rated R, story rated NC-17)
by Becca Furrow – Del Fantasma: Tiger Juice
Amber Gilchrist – First in the Soulguard series
Babette James – More Than Magic
Jeannie Lin – Butterfly Swords (and there’s a poll!)
Rose London – The Encounter (steamy)
Maureen McCarrie – Set the Night On Fire (Rating: NC-17 for language)
Christa McHugh – A Soul for Trouble
Bria Quinlan – Cami’s First Kiss
Kirsten Saell – The Chancellor’s Bride (NC 17 excerpt, grown-ups only website)
T. Sue Versteeg – Another Time, Another Place
Vivienne Westlake – A Halloween Novella (rated 17 and above)
Kate Willoughby – Asking For It (excerpt is PG, site is not)
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I do love little Becca and her kitten plan!
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LMAO. I LOVE the ending line. Hilarious. Great excerpt. Your take on werewolves seems fresh, something that’s hard to accomplish these days.
I love the last line even as a cat person. A ranch full of werewolves and a nanny who doesn’t approve interesting.
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I like your excerpt. It sounds like a premise I’d want to read, and I’m interested in the characters. Thanks for posting it. =o)
LOL — I love the last line. Great job of showing Cade’s feelings for Becca.
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I love Cade’s daughter and the fact that she wants to be a cat. I haven’t told you that but love it. Great excerpt Holly!
Keep at it. How’s the blurb coming?
Hee hee. I love the very last line the best. “A cat’s not a pet. A cat’s an appetizer.” That’s hilarious and I’m even a cat lover.
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I don’t know whether to be amused or upset by that last line. It had me giggling and then saying, “Awwww!” Love the world you’ve built for this family. This is going to be a great story!
I actually wondered if I was gonna turn off the cat people with that line – there’s another one later in the book, when they’re looking for a black cat that showed up out of nowhere, and one werewolf says “I don’t know why we’re looking for the cat. I’m not even hungry.”
But I figure – werewolves don’t like cats. That would kind of be a given.
Thank you! No cats will actually be eaten during the reading of this book…
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Definitely love that last line!
I’m also definitely intrigued by Cade and want to know more about his family.
LOL! I LOVE that last line! Too awesome.
You totally surprised me with the werewolves. I was so wrapped into the cute little kid that it threw me off guard.
I do want to know if she will succeed in becoming a cat!
Hey, what a great excerpt. I loved the cat thing too. It’s such the perfect little girl thing to say.
And I wasn’t at all alarmed for the theoretical cat, because if the alpha says “don’t eat the kitty,” I know the kitty will be fine.
Great excerpt. I’m dying to know if she pulls off becoming a cat.
Loved the last line too.